Thursday, September 12, 2019
My holiday
In the first week of the holidays I was in Christchurch with my grandma,cousin and half brother. We went ice skating and we also went to Margret May-hey. In the second week of the holidays me, grandma,cousin,brother and sister drove down to Dunedin and stayed there for the night. The next morning I woke up at about 8:30 in the morning and made some breakfast witch was toast with a hot chocolate with two marshmallows. at around lunch time we left to go to Naseby and we stayed there for the night. the next morning we left for Queenstown and it took about two hours
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How has it taken me all year to realise you have an individual blog?! how cool, I like your story about going to Grandmas last school holidays
ReplyDeleteHey Connor I like your story, But maybe you could think about using peoples names instead of saying for example me,Grandma,Cousin,Brother and Sister you could say all their names in some of the sentences.
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